Comments on: My short story http://winson.edublogs.org/2008/04/30/my-short-story/ Just another Edublogs.org weblog Thu, 28 Aug 2008 20:53:05 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Tivi http://winson.edublogs.org/2008/04/30/my-short-story/#comment-10 Tivi Wed, 06 Aug 2008 04:19:50 +0000 http://winson.edublogs.org/2008/04/30/my-short-story/#comment-10 I liked the story a lot.I liked the way that you wrote in different colours but the yellow is really hard to read. I like the turtle and I was sad when the turtle died. Bye Tivi I liked the story a lot.I liked the way that you wrote in different colours but the yellow is really hard to read. I like the turtle and I was sad when the turtle died.

Bye
Tivi

]]> By: Naomi http://winson.edublogs.org/2008/04/30/my-short-story/#comment-8 Naomi Fri, 16 May 2008 04:41:04 +0000 http://winson.edublogs.org/2008/04/30/my-short-story/#comment-8 Hi Winson, Great story :!: I liked how the turtles could fly, so cool :cool: Naomi :mrgreen: Hi Winson,
Great story :!:
I liked how the turtles could fly, so cool :cool:
Naomi :mrgreen:

]]> By: Haley http://winson.edublogs.org/2008/04/30/my-short-story/#comment-7 Haley Mon, 05 May 2008 11:05:46 +0000 http://winson.edublogs.org/2008/04/30/my-short-story/#comment-7 wow wow wow excelent Imut say your blog is mad How did you do it good luck in the future.Haley!!! wow wow wow excelent Imut say your blog is mad How did you do it good luck in the future.Haley!!!

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